Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Parenting is not an easy responsibility. It requires utmost care and concentration to raise a child. Some people believes that it is only a mother who plays vital role in raising a child but that is not true in all aspects. This essay speaks about, how the role of a man is equally important and how the duties should be shared between parents.Firstly, this essay will explain about the role and responsibilities of parents and secondly I would like to discuss about importance of father in child upbringing.
To begin with, ever since a child is born that a time mother is ready to take a responsibilities even in minor detail which could be clear from one example, Changing the diapers, brushing the teeth, sending him to school etc which every thing is cover up by one mother.even in preparing a lunch box for his child and men responsibility to drop him or her to school in exact time.so these responsibilities are accomplished by both people in raising the child and day by day these duties will increase in upbringing the child.it is usually seen in some parents who got hectic schedule which put less supervisory to their child will lead them to such deviated path.
furthermore, most of the women and mens are doing professional jobs where the responsibilities are further divided equally to take care the child even in preparing the food for child and drop at school.It is true children are more attracted to mothers than father because she is only one who give a birth to child.but in some cases some child lost their mothers in very early age for instance, a survey was conducted by census 2001 where opponents of the census very hardly come to know some children were living with their fathers because some children lost their mother when they born and so mens had taken a responsiblity to look after their children.personally speaking, mens are not less than any women.
To sum up with, mens are also capable to take liability of their children in case if their mother is no more because of any illness and I have seen many father who are able to do the same duty as women do for their child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...duties should be shared between parents.Firstly, this essay will explain about the role...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a responsibility' or simply 'responsibilities'?
Suggestion: a responsibility; responsibilities
...orn that a time mother is ready to take a responsibilities even in minor detail which could be cle...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ill lead them to such deviated path. furthermore, most of the women and mens are doing p...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...g the food for child and drop at school.It is true children are more attracted to ...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun father seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fathers'.
Suggestion: many fathers
... because of any illness and I have seen many father who are able to do the same duty as wom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, in some cases, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6550802139 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81793446844 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 256.728793612 49.4020404114 520% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.714285714 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4285714286 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 7.06120827912 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164319002725 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797131243307 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445980234916 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103807656377 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418144749887 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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