Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Mathew,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing to ask for some help as I need to raise money for a charity organization "DK trust".
The trust has lent help to extremely poor and backward families in India. They sponsor millennial who can't afford fees for their tertiary education and enable them to get proper education from schools and universities. Its vision is to enable these kids to be financially independent and thus contribute back to society. I am associated with this charity organization as a member for nearly a decade hence I am responsible for handling charity events in India and globally to raise funds.
As I am aware from our past discussions that you have organized such events for similar causes. Since you are working with TP International as Head for Human resources thus I would need your help to hold a similar charity fest in your company. The charity event will not only raise funds but also raise awareness in the society about the problems faced by economically backward and help to eradicate such issues.
I look forward to your immediate help in this noble cause.
Warm wishes
Mark
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-17 | tasneemazim | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-15 | coolchris2100 | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-06 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
| 2019-04-21 | Sonu nbk | 84 | view |
| 2019-01-04 | ahmedarbani | 81 | view |
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give our opinion 73
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,give details of your study plansexplain why you 73
- You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letterDescribe the itemExplain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take 78
- Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree? 84
- Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.1.Thank them for the holiday and the photos2.Explain why you didn’t write earlier3.Invite them to come and stay with yo 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s in India. They sponsor millennial who cant afford fees for their tertiary educatio...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81280788177 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6804820206 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3123576603 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312020654177 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975956130685 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108323641069 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185374081119 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792570664401 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.