Education for young people is important in many countries. However, the others think government should spend more money for education in adult population, who cannot read and write. To extend what do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, education plays an important role in people life. Especially in many nations, instructing young people is extremely vital. However, there remains an opinion that it would be better if government focus more money on educating adult population, who is not able to read and write. From my point of view, I believe that it is essential to explore my agreement.
To begin with, education brings knowledge and skills to illiteracy adults, which is synonym with giving more chances to have better careers. It is undoubtedly true that qualification is the crucial factor that almost owners require. Therefore, people have no certificates may be only able to find manual labor instead of high-ranking jobs. In addition, incomes level of some labors is low while their tasks are difficult and may be dangerous. Consequently, approaching to education gives them – adult people, who cannot read and write – more opportunities to have a better job with the aim of improving their living standard.
Besides, the updated-knowledge, which may help illiteracy adults gaining happier life. By supporting finance for educating them, it means they have more chances to approach modern education systems with various methods and social awareness. As a result, they may have more experience on action and thinking. This helps them avoid misfortunes due to lack of knowledge.
In conclusion, education is import not only for young people but also adult population, who cannot write and read. Therefore, with the purpose of bringing a better life for citizens, I agree that it would be necessary if the government take action on spending more money for education in illiteracy adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89564114402 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9400615846 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354469742877 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11539545128 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129296476844 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246008136701 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14505206997 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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