The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The mention tables describe the sales of Fair trade which labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. The prices of sales are explained by millions of Euros of Fair trade. At the first glance it is evidence that UK made sales of Fair trade predominantly for coffee and Switzerland was a country with the highest sales of bananas in 1999 and 2004.
Turning first to UK which had the greatest growth sales of coffee, increased significantly from 1,5 millions of Euros in 1999 to 20 millions of Euros in 2004. The highest sales of coffee in 1999 was Switzerland by 3 millions of Euros, then the price of coffee in 2004 was double bigger than 1999. In Denmark, the sales of coffee was 1,8 millions of Euros in 1999 and grew 0,2 millions of Euros in 2004. The price of coffee in Belgium climbed slightly from 1 millions of Euros in 1999 and 1,7 millions of Euros in 2004. In addition, the sales of Fair trade of coffee in Sweden was the lowest among both in 1999 and 2004 which were 0,8 millions of Euros and 1 millions of Euros respectively.
In terms of bananas, 15 millions of Euros of sales in Switzerland in 1999 which was the largest among all and rose sharply to 47 millions of Euros in 2004. Beside that, the sales of bananas in UK were 1 millions of Euros in 1999 and 5,5 millions of Euros in 2004. But, the reductions of cost of bananas were in Denmark and Sweden. In Denmark, the price of bananas declined from 2 millions of Euros in 1999 to 0,9 millions of Euros in 2004. While, Sweden accounted 1,8 millions of Euros in 1999, then fell to 1 millions of Euros in 2004 for bananas. But, In Belgium the price of bananas increased from 0,6 millions of Euros to 4 millions of Euros from 1999 to 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 33.7804878049 261% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 326.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39570552147 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39285235787 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.325153374233 0.547539520022 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.145627963 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144399897659 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913705626254 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04360415077 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134517553422 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361982407871 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.