There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In the modern era, there is a great variety of music nowadays. Music is necessary for leisure activities and I believe local as well as foreign music both are important these days.
there are many reasons why music is necessary. The first reason is that it gives comfort to the soul of people. Those individuals who work day and night, music is a great instrument for them to relieve stress such as pop, rock, and folk are different types of music are listened to by them. Another reason is that it is beneficial for those who want to spend more free and lonely time, isolated from the world.for example, thinkers who want to know the origin of world and future of human being. Thus, it is cleared it has a great advantage.
On the other hand, local as well as foreign music should be listened to by both teenagers and adults as it gives them up-to-date information of the world. Now the whole world is a global village so that it is essential for sharing of thoughts and communication between people through music. For instance, local music tells a history of a nation and international music illustrates many historical events of different nations which show their pace of development through different ages. Hence, it is proved both sorts of music has an essential role in life.
In conclusion, music is significant for those living today and traditional and international both music, in my opinion, should be heard today by most people with great zest and zeal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...music both are important these days. there are many reasons why music is necessary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76171875 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59068613751 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6095247284 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406462736337 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155119372789 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952591770202 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267760154715 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373048127009 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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