In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it becomes the debatable issue that the plethora of study material that is available online is replacing the teachers in universities and schools . I disagree with the above mentioned fact that teachers are enable to play much sufficient role in upcoming education for which I am going to discuss the number of related facts.
To begin with, a successful career is hard to choose if anyone has no mentor. however, it is absolutely right that a lot of upcoming reading resources are available for the students but they always need assistance to get straight path for their future. Moreover, an internet assisted device can offer us with ready made stuff but it is quite difficult to understand without tutor. For instance, accepting an online course is quite accessible in the form of time management and off schooling but there is no one here to assess the knowledge that is being acquired after completion. it can be easily said that achieving goal of completion without getting proper information is worthless and wastage.
Moving further, i agreed that modern education is enough to promote pace of an individual as they can easily utilize their time in other activities instead of visiting to libraries and school. but it is associated with lack of social integration and upgradation of knowledge. For example, informal training hampers the learning environment and results in the loss of opportunity to share opinions and friendliness. Furthermore, teachers are a wide source of knowledge and communication that is being missed if the online system will continue to replace the classroom environment.
In conclusion, tutors are the vital source of society and their absence will result in serious threat to the current education system and in my opinion a readily available material can never replace the experienced people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20134228188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86415749781 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4364158538 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147912145923 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499095559837 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342737298711 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885674813309 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471834702663 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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