Online shopping has become popular nowadays. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?
Has the internet dominated the modern world? In fact, we have become exposed to many changes thanks to the internet.
One of these changes is online shopping which can be considered a positive development for some people. Other people are of the belief that it has a negative impact in our nation development.
In my opinion, I totally agree with the former point of view.
It is believed that online shopping has its own merits for individuals who can benefit from saving efforts, time and money of transportation; for example: a senior citizen will find it beneficial to purchase his needed items in a daily life routine while staying at home.
On the other hand , online shopping is causing a major job lose according to an article that was published in New York Time in 2017 that several multi-branches department stores has declared bankruptcy due to the descending sales rates.
In modern world, financial challenges are facing families all over the world as a result of the declined employment rate. Various Economical studies that can be found in you tube channels published by famous financial experts such as Mr. Mohamed Elaryan give a lot of information about the upcoming financial crisis which result in more pressure in each modern family economics.
It can be concluded that a lot of negative impact will result from online shopping to our society that will overcome its benefits. For this reason, this type of marketing should be controlled for a number of goods which will reduce the effect on traditional market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ile staying at home. On the other hand , online shopping is causing a major job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98443579767 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70152814378 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.671996461 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180223431235 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598088387529 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659139221639 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740389565467 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729310748134 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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