Companies along with making money, should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or not?
It is true that the ultimate goal of every organization is making a capital gain, but I believe, it is always the social responsibility that plays an essential role in parallel with money making. The essay briefly explains the steps that can be initiated by any company that helps society to live better life.
Every organization must adopt to various environmental activities like planting trees, cleaning the public places, recycling everyday's wastages as bio-fertilizers and can offer to farmers, can provide free education to needy,nd much more. By following the above activities, the major problem in society can be reduced to a considerable amount. Even many tax payers are contributing to the society by opening many educational institutes.
These educational institutes, purely helps in equipping the under previleged people by providing free and quality education. Also, during natural calamities, these companies can offer great help to the victims, For example, in the last flood happened in India, many companies initiated the volunteering activities across the affected areas and lent a helping hand at the time of the major disaster. This supported the affected people a lot.
Nowadays, many such intiatives are being taken from different organizations in all possible areas.
Since the society is large, when more and more organizations come up with new activities, many such problems in the society could be reduced. This helps the growth of economy of the Nation as well as the organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , nd
...ers, can provide free education to needy,nd much more. By following the above activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, so, well, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98883653715 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63025210084 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7573453674 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806948700147 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262223321172 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439261993224 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442242687976 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516351617937 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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