You work a part-time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say
– Why do you want to apply?
– What are your future goals?
– Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear Watson,
I am writing this letter about the advertisement which I saw in the company monthly newsletter. The permanent job position of Logistics co-ordinator is opened up and inviting candidates to apply. I would like to apply for the job.
As you are aware, I am working in our company’s logistics department as assistant logistics executive past one year. I have joined the part-time job to complete my bachelor’s degree in supply chain management. Now I have completed my degree and looking for a full-time job in a reputed firm. In my experience, I haven’t come across any company as good as ours in terms of employee benefits and work culture.
In my past one-year experience I had learned many scenarios where an expert logistics person could save time and money for the logistics department. This has given me enough confidence to apply for the position, where I can utilize my skills with more benefits to the company.
If I have given a chance to join as a full-time employee, I would like to pursue my master’s degree by utilizing the advanced study and training facility that our company provides to all permanent staffs. Which I trust will be an added advantage and beneficial for the company to reach its targeted growth in the Logistics department.
Yours faithfully,
Stanley John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04977375566 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04004382611 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8720291197 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282911876971 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100912263909 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431394888088 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157669286649 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259786310172 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.