Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. John and Mrs. Susan,
I am writing in response to the email you sent to me concerning the loud noise coming from my apartment.
My kitchen cabinet got damaged last night. It fell off the kitchen wall in the night. I wanted to purchase an new one but the outrageous price the seller mentioned put me off from buying it. So i contacted Smith, the carpenter, who fixed our main entrance door, to make another one for me.
I am extremely sorry for any discomfort i might have caused you and your families. If i had known, i would have bought a second-hand kitchen cabinet from the retail store down the road. Kindly accept my sincere apology.
Could you let the me know what time you leave for work as well as the time you get back, so that i can inform the carpenter on when to start and finish for the day. However, i will tell him to hold on for the moment until i get a reply from you.
I await your response.
Your sincerely,
Ben Ray
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...wall in the night. I wanted to purchase an new one but the outrageous price the se...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mentioned put me off from buying it. So i contacted Smith, the carpenter, who fix...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I am extremely sorry for any discomfort i might have caused you and your families...
^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t have caused you and your families. If i had known, i would have bought a second...
^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... you and your families. If i had known, i would have bought a second-hand kitchen...
^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'me'?
Suggestion: the; me
...pt my sincere apology. Could you let the me know what time you leave for work as we...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... well as the time you get back, so that i can inform the carpenter on when to sta...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... start and finish for the day. However, i will tell him to hold on for the moment...
^
Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ell him to hold on for the moment until i get a reply from you. I await your r...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32596685083 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25572742541 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.619272247 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2307692308 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243627225455 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803006309048 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818414028652 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109144137717 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786191100732 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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