You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.describe your courseexpress your feelings about the coursegive suggestions regarding what the university should do

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You have recently enrolled in a part-time course in a university. Write a letter to the dean about something you are not pleased with.
describe your course
express your feelings about the course
give suggestions regarding what the university should do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction about the part-time course I enrolled in your university last week. The course name is “Learn C programming in-depth”. Please allow me to elaborate more on this.

First of all, the course curriculum and name of the course both seems very pleasing for an intermediate to advanced level programmers. Being myself at medium level, I opt for this course to enhance my knowledge one-level ahead. But, to my utter dismay, I did not feel the same way after I attended classes for couple of weeks. This course is so simple for experienced students and is suitable for fresher only. Moreover, most of the contents were explained by the tutor hypothetically with no practical information about them.

As a suggestion, I would like to request you to inform tutor about changing the course material which fits best for advanced programmers. Along with that, teaching approach should be more pragmatic rather than theory because it is a programming course and with more practical knowledge, students will be benefited hugely.

I hope the situation will be dealt on priority basic in a positive way.

Yours Sincerely
Simar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to express my dissatis...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tuation will be dealt on priority basic in a positive way. Yours Sincerely Simar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17010309278 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96594283112 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4258627497 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200814633006 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697859275332 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683037890616 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106627873835 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788751626578 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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