A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Every nation has a particular curriculum of its own. In most of the countries students are required to study a specific curriculum till high school. For instance in India children study the same courses till class 10 with some nuances like different states have different regional languages which are taught to children of that particular state. The paths diversify once students reach class 11th where they are allowed to choose from a range of fields. Nations all around the globe have almost the same structure with acute differences. The authors statement of having the same curriculum is valid for the most part but it also has some flaws.
The first advantage of having the same curriculum is that this would eliminate discrimination of any form be it sex, caste, religion, race etc. All students would be treated as equal who would have to learn the same course as any other student of his age or class. For example , earlier some schools did not allow girls to study. If they did , girls were taught basic subjects limited to just household problems. There was a huge discrepancy between the subjects taught to boys and girls. This kind of discrimination would be eliminated by same curriculum.
Another plus point is that the poor will get to read the same subjets as the rich students. To cite an example, In Mumbai, there is a school which intakes kids who belong to a socially rich family. They have an excessive fee structure which cannot be afforded by the common man. This school has the best faculty in India and it not only teaches students basic subjects like maths and science but also subjects like philosphy, astronomy and ethics. Juxtaposed to schools like this are the government schools of Mumbai , where leave alone astronomy , even Maths is not taught properly. So this kind of discrepancy could also be sorted by a same curriculum
Now where the same curriculum has it advantages , it also poses a certain disadvantage. This disadvantage is that what if a particular student does not have interest in Science ? He only has his interest in English ? Then what ?
Him studying the extra subjects of physics, biology in class what not come into much effect. And even if he gets to know the basic idea of these subjects, he would never be able to apply that basic knowledge in real life situations. The time taken up by studying so many subjects of disinterest can be utilized instead in getting a strong hold of the subject the student is interested in. In this case, the authors argument does not hold much ground.
In conclusion, Overall the same curriculum may have abundant advantages, but one disadvantage significantly weakens the authors statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, all the same
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90989010989 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63883867099 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512087912088 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4798594812 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.36 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220970067559 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612389269305 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066351733801 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109060704883 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796552264782 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.