Some people believe the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. However, others argue that there are still some advantages of adverts.
In recent decades, advertising industry has experienced great boom. On one side of the argument, there are people who believe advertisement should be prohibited, however others opine that, it is still beneficial. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and also will elicit whether advertising is beneficial or has drawbacks.
Nowadays, newly established companies have concluded that, having an innovative advertising has a major boon in their sales. Therefore, a soar in companies revenue has seen. In this situation, people are compelled to consumption of goods which are just advertised on TV commercial breaks. So, there are number of people who believe this will affect their shopping choice in wrong ways and also will forc them to buy unnecessary thing in order to nice advertisements they have seen on the TV or boards. A good illustration of this is illegal drugs or things that has been revealing on European TV channels such as losing weight drugs or some drugs for increasing sexual power. Illegal companies not only profit from these kinds of adverts, but also they heart the humanity and consequently the society. Thus, it is acceptable to ban the illegal advertisements.
On the other hand, there are numerous benefits of advertising for people. Firstly, some announcements aware people about recently launched products which they never mentioned about them without these adverts. For example, coca cola; a soda drink brand, would not be succeeded without the good announcement on the bus stations which leads the company to increase the number of its products sell from 35 at the first year to approximately 10000 at the second year of establishment. Secondly, finding appropriate households is impossible with no help of commercial advertises. For instance, in UK 35% of customers say they choose the brand of refrigerator and furniture by hearing it from the radio or TV. So, it is clear that, merits of advertisement outweigh the demerits.
In conclusion, however, it is obvious that every coin has two sides, thanks to the advertising which develop the human’s lifestyle and awareness about newly launched products, I completely believe that, it has more advantages than drawbacks. Furthermore, it is believed that, economic development will not be reached its peak except the great boom of advertising industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99506675867 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589333333333 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8679252233 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192402788555 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561796095981 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386042004366 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112441054493 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146716247124 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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