You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Clara Johnson , I stayed at your hotel last week. I am writing to require your assistance regarding the following issue.
On December 1st I arrived to Chicago for business purposes and checked in Hilton hotel. I was given the room number 14 which is located on the second floor.
My booking was for 7 days , however I had to leave abruptly after 3 days because of an emergency situation at my work. Due to the haste, I packed my bag carelessly and forgot some clothes in the room’s wardrobe. My grey velvet jacket and a matching skirt, as well as black leather shoes were left there.
Could you please send these items by FedEx to my home address : 1234 New York, 15 Bolton street? The delivery costs can be withdrawn from my credit card as an extra hotel service. It’s the same card that I used to pay for my stay.
I would appreciate your help very much. If you need further details you can contact me by phone +123456958.
I’m looking forward hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Clara Johnson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Sir or Madam, My name is Clara Johnson , I stayed at your hotel last week. I am ...
^^
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...second floor. My booking was for 7 days , however I had to leave abruptly after 3...
^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, I packed my bag carelessly and forgot some clothes in the room's wardrobe...
^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me card that I used to pay for my stay. I would appreciate your help very much. ...
^^^
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I would appreciate your help very much. If you need further details you can contac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, second, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62032085561 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40511919413 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754010695187 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4540879627 44.8134815571 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4615384615 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222283934194 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074503667138 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530170438485 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113475232763 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678373446237 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.