You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. it has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to join me on a short holiday to Samoa next week.
As spoken last time I need a break from my monotonous and hectic work schedule. Lately, I have not been able to keep up a healthy work-life balance. To elucidate I have been involved in some alluring projects which gave me sleepless nights. I know you love travelling and I believe this is ideal opportunity to get away from your busy life and explore one of the famous travel destinations moreover it will great to have your company on this fun trip.
I am planning for a short trip to Samoa, it is one of the secluded islands in the Pacific ocean which attracts tourist globally. From the white sand beaches you can see the panoramic view of the Pacific ocean apart from this we can explore nearby islands and try adventure sports like sky-diving, snorkelling and kayaking. I plan to travel next week on Thursday as the flight tickets are cheap on that day.
As I need to plan an itinerary so let me know your response immediately.
Yours loving
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... this letter finds you hale and hearty. it has been a long time since we last met....
^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our response immediately. Yours loving Brian
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56038647343 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52840291542 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2661063033 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136220221852 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496833523281 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500386731231 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846235891617 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523684254396 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.