Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
These days, the brain drain has become a growing trend that qualified people from developing countries tend to move to developed ones for earning a living. Although there are several causes of this phenomenon, some measures could be proposed to encourage them to stay back and support their own nations.
It can be seen that there are some reasons why there is such a movement. First, since international companies have given better treatment and a higher salary than the domestic ones, employees might be attracted and involved in that to ensure their own living standard. In facts, in some poor countries, the condition of working environments like technology and material facilities cannot adopt the ambitions of workers, which is susceptible to limit the ability of qualified people. Second, due to globalization, recruiting people, especially educated ones, has been popular and necessary to ensure the vacancies in rich countries. For example, by easily approaching through media and broadcast facilities, developed nations like Japan can satisfy their demands of human resources in specialist fields like engineering, computing and medicine from others.
However, there are also some solutions to deal with this brain drain phenomenon. First, governments and corporations should take steps to not only improve the quality of infrastructures and buildings, but also invest more in education, medical healthcare services, and even treatment systems. This means that citizens would have better lives and more opportunities for their careers without going overseas for seeking jobs. In addition, the developed countries also should aid or pay for the expenditure which developing countries have to suffer from technical training qualified employees. For instance, if Japan takes human resources from the export labor markets such as Vietnam or Malaysia, they will compensate for the export nations, which is called relevant value.
In conclusion, the movement of educated labors has become publicity recognized case, the bar of government and corporation responsibility towards this trend should be so high.
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The charts show what the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 72
- The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59813084112 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87691963211 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629283489097 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2596715611 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.230769231 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809465674517 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328847833015 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314640803666 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542679002656 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206277879493 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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