it is better for govenments to improve internet access than iproving public transportation
These days many internet and public transportation play an important role in society. I am of the opinion that it is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
The first reason which should be pointed here is that internet play a vital role in people's activities. I am not the only person who has this opinion many people think this way. because internet not only helps many people to access to many sources and improve their knowledge, but also many activities are being done by the internet; in addition expansion of internet would help to improve public transportation; many navigation programs help to reduce traffic, and public transportation will benefit from this. For example, in my country there is a company named Snapp which serves as internet-taxi; by improving internet access this company can serve better in more area of the country.
The other subtle point which deserves some words is that many people communicate with internet, so many people can communicate with each other from the different part of the world, as a result, expansion of internet access would benefit many people to save their money and time, and also internet communication save many people's life. For example, a person who gets stuck in debrites after Earthquake could be helped because he can ask for help by internet from emergency units who are responsible for saving people life's, if he has no access to the internet , he would be endangered, and it is more likely to die.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet access should be improved because not only does it help many people to be knowledgeable, but also play an important role in communication; in addition can save many people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
These days many internet and public transportation play an impor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch I explore in the following essay. The first reason which should be pointed...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...his opinion many people think this way. because internet not only helps many people to ...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun navigation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much navigation', 'a good deal of navigation'.
Suggestion: much navigation; a good deal of navigation
... help to improve public transportation; many navigation programs help to reduce traffic, and pu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... better in more area of the country. The other subtle point which deserves so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fes, if he has no access to the internet , he would be endangered, and it is more ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gered, and it is more likely to die. In conclusion, I strongly believe that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00970873786 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82453204434 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478964401294 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9880800905 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.8 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290159218907 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139852130136 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10671047583 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21034082678 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103558121738 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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