Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
Laws are inevitable part of a society which are required to keep the society and country in a harmony order. It is often argued that law changes human’s behavior, however some are opposite of this notion as in my perception, although enforcing laws can place limits on the behavior but it can never alter the core nature of human.
To begin with, it is true to say that the basic purpose of laws is to maintain general peace in the society or country. Thus, laws are formulated to keep in mind the best interests of the society whether it is a person's choice that he will follow these rules or not. For instance, as in traffic rules, some people obey the traffic rules and stops at the red light while some cross the road at red light which may lead to road accidents. Moreover, if there are no rules in the society or country then it will have devastating effect on our society as every person will become fearless and thus will engage in abysmally heinous activities which enhances crime rates or violence in society.
Furthermore, punishment cannot bring reform; neither can laws of the society. For the society to be free from crime, the moral judgment and rehabilitation should be motivated largely instead of rendering them with punishment. With the moral training the person is taught to lead a clean and healthy life which results towards the betterment of the society as a whole.
In conclusion, traffic laws are only good enough to put a limit or restriction on people to regulate them in the most propitious manner. Thus, for a good society, individuals and government should work together in order to create a hassle-free and congenial society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76816608997 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59460201706 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7547107278 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.272727273 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.25397266985 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159436366238 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561546326098 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635747290245 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962353736066 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683663193403 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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