What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
The environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence on all the surviving living beings for instance human beings, flora and fauna. As soon as an imbalance occurs in those factors, our existence is threatened. Likewise. environment pollution has increased, which affects like global warming is also increasing day by day, so that humanity is not safe. I will discuss some causes and solutions of pollution in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the smoke of vehicles and industries pollute the air, due to which man have to many health problems, it has become difficult for surviving the asthma patents this atmosphere, so that skin and asthma diseases has inclined. Moreover, pollution affect in new generations and growth of vegetables and plants. Furthermore, the temperature of earth is increasing day by day, because of this raising heat effect on the living beings. Besides this, global warming is also increasing due to which glaciers will be molded and coast regions on the sea will be destroyed because floods.
On the other side, it is right said that every black cloud has silver lining, in this way people can solve this problem by some works. First of all they should more travel in public transport and biclycles, due to which air pollution will be stopped and natural fossilm fuels will be saved. Apart from this, all people should grow more and more trees and they should stop the deforestation.
In conclusion, it can be said that if all people and government will take some measures to demolish the environmental pollution, then it can be stopped. Government should make strict rules against the people who contribute in deforestation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: The surrounding environment
The environment around us constitutes of those factors, which inf...
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Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
The environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence on all t...
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Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...e factors, our existence is threatened. Likewise. environment pollution has increased, w...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Environment
... our existence is threatened. Likewise. environment pollution has increased, which affects ...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...eases has inclined. Moreover, pollution affect in new generations and growth of vegetable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74053502649 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7229965928 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.25397266985 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128429080002 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524592491116 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796879284749 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805593255694 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843235245806 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.