The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s culture identity. Some people believe the government should make sure that new buildings are built in a traditional style.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s burgeoning era, buildings shape has been changed dramatically which concern some people about the loss of their national cultures. Thus, some people believe that constructing buildings in the traditional shape by authority will reserve the nation's culture. However, I strongly disagree with the mentioned argument.
Since the time immemorial, infinity development in the architectural industry has led to attracting much more tourists to countries. Boon to the modern architectural buildings, the government have to encourage the individuals to take place in modern industries Besides building the miniature of real traditional buildings. By this, not only nations will embrace more tourists but also they can soar the sale of cultural and traditional souvenirs of that country which by itself will introduce the regional cultures to the global. For instance, China’s government has provided various facilities to foreign people to visit such artificial Maquette of real old buildings and even purchase the symbols of them. So, it is noteworthy that encourage local people to construct model traditional buildings not only will refrain the high expenditure but it increases the cultural presentation to other nations.
On the other hand, holding the nationality cultural dances festivals at certain times of a year could be another way to introduce and the traditional culture of nations to the whole world and keep it alive. Recent statistics have shown that, developed countries have witnessed a great boom in the cultural introduction to other nations just by holding the yearly live festivals which contains the costumes and culture of each corner of that country. Also, place each country’s own cultural and historical books in schools’ curriculum could be another way of keeping the nations cultural values alive. Thus, above the buildings, traditional ceremonies and educational books assist the culture introduction.
In conclusion, it is noteworthy that construction of traditional buildings could help the nations cultural protection, but, authorities have to framing other measures such as encouraging artists to build the maquette of traditional buildings to save more money and also hold cultural festivals to introduce the nations’ traditions and cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72093023256 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08624015796 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8455951847 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.384615385 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253735097644 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964913020489 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452090173163 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166657540408 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305663890246 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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