Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarket bin the area. How does these effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Large supermarkets are, without doubt, dominating players of the market nowadays. This essay would analyze the negative impacts of these on local shops and necessary steps be taken to minimize the effect.
To commence with, the first and foremost is taking away the green belt from the cities. To prove my point, big supermarkets require big area which might lead to cutting trees, ruining existing parks and gardens from the site. These green areas are the oasis in the desert of concrete jungle having incredible value for the residents over there. No greenery means no pure air to breathe. As a consequence, people will face severe respiratory problem. Another problem would be the problem of unemployment for local people as supermarkets will provide job opportunity to highly skilled and competent young ones which is not mandatory in case of small running businesses. Adverse impact on local languages and cultures is one more drawback of having huge shopping malls. As such, people from different countries would arrive to buy products from there not necessarily use folk languages.
Nevertheless, the best possible step to tackle the situation would be not to allow them to establish in or around the cities. For example, running these expansive malls out of the cities ensures local people to run their own small shops. Easy accessibility of local businesses will attract customers thereby no dearth of employment possibilities. It will give a big smile on the faces of local residents. Apart from this, providing quality training to local businessmen of doing a successful business would also boost their confidence and morale to battle with their counterparts. Quality products with reasonable price have no match even with the supermarkets. More so, the percentage of middle class or lower class people is much higher as compared to élite class. Therefore, local shopkeepers should not be worried about the flourishing extensive shopping malls.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that offering some facilities by the governments and self confidence plus smart strategy of local shopkeepers would be adequate to ameliorate the state of affairs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to ameliorate the state of affairs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78973122255 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7376470516 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5789473684 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231028559647 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064861403041 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504686507563 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143103709155 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560445176015 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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