Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In the present scenario, due to an advancement of technology, varieties of subjects are available at school and learners study curriculum consist of distinct subjects like math, science, history, music, and so forth. Many believe that subject like History plays a supreme role in students learning process; nonetheless another school of thought prioritizes the scientific subjects. Despite the fact that national heritage has a great influence on society, I strongly advocates the field of science and technology and will scrutinize both the perspectives in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, history helps to remember the traditions, the rituals, the customs, and the values of any religion or community and to know about the human revolution. Moreover, for the sake of humanitarianism, researchers or economist can be more aware of the terrible disasters happened in the past decades. Apart from that, a trip to the historical museum during the learning period enhances the knowledge among the pupils especially youngsters about the good old days. In addition to that, by finding out about incredible personalities, denizens can be propelled and it leads to resolve their issues or might be helpful to get accomplishment in their respective undertakings.
On the flip side, in the period of modernization, the scientific subjects or information about technology, give the right direction or are more helpful to achieve the goals or for the betterment of a country. To illustrates, it is noteworthy that the thrive and progress of each country depend upon its amendment in various branches such as promoted health care system, equipped army with advanced weapons, modern agricultural productivity, upgraded machinery in factories, innovative industries, and many more and having a top-level amenities in all result in massive amount of income of a nation.
To conclude, in light of the aforementioned facts, to create a salubrious ambiance for a kingdom, enhancement in technology should be mandatory and to execute this, children, the roots of development of any country, ought to more oriented on science and technology from the early stage of their learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'advocate'
Suggestion: advocate
... great influence on society, I strongly advocates the field of science and technology and...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perspectives in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, history helps to remember...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 6, column 535, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amenity'?
Suggestion: amenity
...s, and many more and having a top-level amenities in all result in massive amount of inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nonetheless, so, apart from, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46587537092 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14337878025 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620178041543 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0941051682 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.2 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137697237618 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498601051541 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033977675121 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765303438093 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481133256858 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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