The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons relevant.
The two maps illustrate changes about entrance area of a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that bus stops disappeared while bus station and public car park were built.
In 2007, there were six bus stops in both sides of the hospital road but they were demolished in 2010. Instead, a big bus station appeared on the left of that road. Moreover, the cross-road between hospital road and ring road and the intersection between hospital road and city road in 2007 were replaced by roundabouts in 2010.
In addition, although the car park still remained in the front of the city hospital, it was not for both staff and public as it used to in 2007 but for only staff in 2010. Over the same period, a public car park was constructed in the east corner of the city hospital and of course, a new entrance opened to connect it and ring road.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons relevant. 67
- whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. to what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not the local people. Why is this case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, still, while, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52229299363 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35508638991 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9729500374 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239032287602 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119473838971 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884122826898 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146398615565 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100824675906 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.