Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that finding a job in today's competitive world may prove to be a hideous task. Some people believe that, higher education is essential for securing a job. While others argue that, experience and practical skills is much more important. I completely agree with the latter view as communication and on field experience is much prioritized by companies while recruiting. This essay with discuss both views with examples.
On the one hand, due to tremendous increase in competition, many parents are concerned of their child's future. Hence, many individuals believe that further studies may be important to gain knowledge, to get employed. This is because many employer's may seek employees having good subject knowledge. To illustrate, investment bankers desiring to work in Morgan Stanley, a renowned multi-national investment bank, have prerequisites of having knowledge in financial markets. As a consequence, one may have to pursue a course in this field to gain sufficient knowledge before approaching the interviewer. In short, education is plays a vital role in providing extensive knowledge, which is likely to aid individuals in getting their desired job.
On the other hand, I believe that communication is one of the most essential skill required for securing a job. This is because, all jobs require people to communicate with each other, at all times to complete the required tasks efficiently. To illustrate, if a recruiter is seeking for a receptionist and the hired personnel is unable to communicate fluently then the customers will not be happy and the work will be hampered. Additionally, having practical skills is also important to complete the work without much assistance and training. This is because companies may not want to bear cost for training staff. For instance, if a doctor does not have any practical experience, then he may not be able to diagnose the patient's illness. In other words, persons being able to communicate and have hands on field experience is likely to find more open jobs in the market.
To conclude, to attain subject knowledge, education is important. However, in my opinion, soft skills such as communication and experience is ultimately required for securing a job.
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Suggestion: patients'; patient's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in short, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25626740947 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05066453548 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7792835922 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.35 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245947712286 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751247064888 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591667367998 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154034710154 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480296930903 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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