Letter to council for the dirty street:
Explain why it has become dirty recently
What problem it has caused
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the sanitation and cleanliness problems on our favorite Smith street. Nowadays, the garbage collection vans are throwing the collected junk on the roadside in an open area, and this is increasingly polluting the street and the nearby surroundings. On questioning one of the staff in charge, I learned that it is due to the absence of large dumping bins or containers and therefore these vehicles are carelessly throwing the waste material on the ground.
As a result, not only it has disgusted the view of the street but also contributes towards spreading harmful bacterial infections. Consequently, people residing or working nearby are falling prey to the germs and bacteria, thus they have become prone to harmful diseases.
My suggestion on this situation is that the area should be cleaned immediately furthermore, considerably big trash disposal containers should be installed at the affected spot, which will again make the street speckless.
I look forward to prompting action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, look, so, therefore, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36781609195 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94860633133 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3352829463 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673454870016 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241895893246 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227190529612 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315985082079 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021697347884 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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