the important of healthy
Concerning the important of healthy, all of people trust that the healthy must tobe supervised, because without healthy every person can not do anything, thus, it means that the healthy was very important for over life. Beside, everyone can be healthy, and there are many ways to be healthy is very important and many ways to achieve it.
The healthy is very sacred, everyone in world wants to be healthy, even though it is on the earth or hereafter. The healthy is many definitions for it and it can be defined as physically, such as always maintain the health with doing any sports, also maintain in the pattern of eat. Furthermore, the doctor always remind the importance of healthy, which is give seminary or creating any research. ultimately, the healthy should be considered to have a great condition in the future.
The healthy can be achieve in several conditions, it ia just related the situation, if the anyone love to conserve his body which always keep the absorption of eat or sport. It is very helpful for the future, because the healthy is an asset in our life. On the other hand, to achieve the goal of healthy most of people should learn how to improving the healthy, and always reading the book that recommended for it.
To conclude, i personally believe that the healthy is very meaningful and to get it can that can be realized as the people should be concern of the importance of healthy which it would give beneficial if we care about healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ultimately
...give seminary or creating any research. ultimately, the healthy should be considered to ha...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'anyone'?
Suggestion: the; anyone
...s, it ia just related the situation, if the anyone love to conserve his body which always ...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...st related the situation, if the anyone love to conserve his body which always keep ...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...er hand, to achieve the goal of healthy most of people should learn how to improving the healt...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
...can be realized as the people should be concern of the importance of healthy which it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71705426357 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5737163761 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.588405903 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.7 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401604680039 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177508145351 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114086491378 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286755212487 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106558844309 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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