travelling to study is over rated we have brilliant scholars who studied locally is travel really necessary for teritiary studies
Students from developing countries are travelling to western countries for higher education far every month.It is really helpful for them to pursue new courses which is not available in poor countries.I tend to think that it depends on people also it will be conducive for our country.
To begin with,most pupils are moving to other country for new courses and good lifestyle. The course which is there is totally different to deprived country For instance course like entrepreneur is not exist in developing country but it presents in those country .It purely all about business study such course has not given important in our country.Moreover,Lifestyle is different compare to destitute country.
On the other hand,when students who has traveled to other country for tertiary education, they could learn other language while they are interacting with other overseas students. Additional, they sort out stage fear because most western college projects will be individual based assessment so they have to present their project on the stage in front of every faculty and students.One difficulty hey are facing is food and climate condition.Besides,English language is being high standards in those country.
In conclusion, although they have met lot of difficulties in food and climate condition,students who has gone to english speaking country,they would develop high standards of tertiary education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5462962963 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42642638987 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1813333746 50.4703680194 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.666666667 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.9669160288 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.25397266985 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114966881292 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545566882288 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294950198203 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667937212147 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231151249011 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 12.6369458128 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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