Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this ? What solutions can be offered ?
Child obesity is becoming a serious public health challenge in many countries. This easy will look up some primary cause of this and also offer some possible solutions to this problem.
There are a number of reason for childhood obesity. The first reason of this is kids tend to have the unhealthy eating habits. They consume too much fast food, candy or sugar drinks. Those are high in fat and sugars but low in vitamins and minerals so that children become increasingly gain weight. Another reason is young children prefer having the sedentary lifestyles to the balanced diet. They almost spend time browsing the internet, play game instead of playing outside and do sport.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, children should be educated by their parents about the detrimental effects of imbalanced diet. Also, it is very important for parents to introduce with kids that what are more healthy food choices so they would have a range knowledge of healthy food and diets. Besides, junk food advertising need to be banned in the TV programs or magazines so children in not be paid attention for fast food. Secondly, it is quite necessary for adults to encourage children to take regular exercise so the rising level of obesity can be lower. By doing physical activities, young children also cam control their weight and have a healthy lifestyles.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to childhood obesity and measures can be implemented to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03515625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50075367058 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2653758257 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281141655002 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766065887135 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819846816229 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180275874604 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116268814243 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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