People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Time boundation work should be followed with a limited number of working hours and the management must not force any employee to do overtime duty hours. Fixed hours of work will improve the quality of life for the worker and the professional, personal goals will be maintained as well as followed simultaneously.
Punctuality of working hours will benefit the employee in a variety of ways such as, disciplined, the labour will be aware mentally that he or she has only to give a fixed number of hours of the day to the organization, will help him to make other appointments with family or friends for refreshment purpose. Eventually, the person mental stability will sustain and psychologically will feel pressurized during his work time. Furthermore, the detrimental impact of overwork on health can lead to ill condition, which will raise the sick leaves from the employee, therefore impacting the business of the company
Entertainment with the work is equally pivotal for any working individual, which he or she can easily manage if they have fixed number of working hours, that will keep them in a fixed time frame, thus they can manage their zone for private and corporate life. For illustration, the employees working in the factory with 8 hours daily schedule with 1 day off per week has improved with less number of absentees and active participation of workers in their work.
In conclusion, the balance between professional and personal career is equally important for any individual to have a healthy and active corporate phase, which eventually will benefit him as well as the organization for smooth operations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11194029851 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93781621107 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.724516879 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.714285714 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200514985659 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105974122323 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463115420132 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128085438634 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606227178393 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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