Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nature difficulties like pollution are extensive for a common man to solve is thought by many individuals. Others think that person can also contribute to minimizing these issues. In my opinion, these projects require a large amount of funds which can only be generated by government bodies.
Firstly, Government support is highly valuable and required for removing environmental problems. such as deforestation, contaminated rivers, air pollution in the major cities. all these can be prohibited on a major scale by authorities rule and regulations such as revising the guidelines for the industrial waste, ban on tree cuttings, and removal of old vehicles from the path and introduction with electric or CNG cars. Moreover, the authorities can also take part in cleaning by generating projects like clean Ganga initiative done by India to support the filtration of holy water. I believe these things require major funds which can only be generated by government control bodies thus, they have a lead role to play in detoxification of community.
Secondly, locals can act voluntarily by expressing the environmental concern, and make people aware of the society wastes. people can spread hands in cleaning the waste of the community and be responsible for the waste control by minimizing the household garbage. Furthermore, Individuals can help each other such as, green waste of kitchen can be used as decomposite to make the soil fertile, which will help the farmers in future.
In conclusion, both individual, as well as authorities, have own independent and important role to play in the removal of waste from the society but the money needed in them is always in excess amount, Hence administration has a prime part in decontamination of the region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25886524823 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08841633804 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.095005801 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198051413928 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719904320244 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424178623659 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110513219349 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478102442712 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.