The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The charts above illustrate how much water was utilized for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes in six different parts of the world.
east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Overall, most of the water resources were used on agriculture, whereas domestic use was the least. In most areas of the world such as south america, africa, central asia, and south east asia water was mostly used for agricultural purposes. In contrast, in north america and europe, the major water usage purpose was industrial.
east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The proportion of water used for agricultural purposes was the highest in central asia, about 88%. Similarly, people of africa, south east asia, and south america used most of the water for agriculture. The percentages were 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively.
east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">A different figure of water usage was seen in north america and europe, as the population consumed water mostly for industrial purposes. The percentage of water sources spent on the industry was 48% and 53%, respectively. Total usage of water for domestic purposes fluctuated between 7% to 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, whereas, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.58638743455 4.92477711251 134% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.16401887673 2.65546596893 157% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476439790576 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1510973988 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257593295862 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121482143106 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601853124919 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1654351744 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850982885607 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.38 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.65 11.4140731707 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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