Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and real needs of the society in which they are sold.
Agree
many people argue that the big number of selling products is boosted by advertising by company which want to consume their goods. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but I would also argue how necessary when we buy popular goods.
there is no doubt that advertising can rise the sales for several reasons. Firstly, the produces are able to be noticed easier and faster by customers across the world through advertising. As we easily see, the most effective way to advertising is media marketing such as facebook, twiter, youtube. The advertising always appears around us that create the false need in buyer’s mind to get the goods to satisfy without a thought on its actual need. Secondly, customer might get greatly influenced by the celebrity marketing. For example, fans support their idols by buying the products that they represent.
On the other hand, I believe that most people consider to buy product not only its various marketing, but also rely on other factors. they are not being manipulated by the advertising easily because they look before buying something according to their finance, needs. A new car, for example, may have greatly improved safety features, or it may be more economical to run, or it may pollute less. A new TV may brings more colorful and share image, or it may have a protected features for eyes.
In conclusion, I believe that while advertising have a significant role in sales of demanding consumer products, many people prefer make reasonable decisions in buying items which necessary to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01136363636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69321911068 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5844358639 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171380784577 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520528783464 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510390978999 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106906030134 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394440343015 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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