the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is alarming issue that environment degradation has become more and more severe. While authorities and big enterprise should take their responsibilities for reducing the damage, I strongly believe that individuals also aid to alleviate environmental problem.
On the one hand. The government and companies should place a high priority on improving the problems. From government’s perspective, they might to implement environmentally-friendly rules and regulations to cut down contamination. For example the congestion charge or raise taxes on cost of fuel to encourage people use more public transportation to decrease the exhausted emissions. This would have global consequences, slowing the process of global warming as the quantity of greenhouse gases release into the atmosphere was reduced. In term of depletion of natural resources, the national authorities need to develop alternative energy further to be less dependence on fossil fuel. From enterprise’s perspective, although the effort of maximise their profit, they also have social responsibilities such as installing the waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemicals waste into the river, water pollution can be controlled.
On the other hand, every individual has the sense of environment protection. The most basic method is recycling or using as less as possible the plastic bags which take 1000 years to break down. In addition, we can join organization about protect environment in order to campaign for people awareness because all the efforts can be failed if people do not cooperate which government.
In conclusion, I completely agree that not only government, but enterprises and individual should also take a great responsibility for environmental protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ic method is recycling or using as less as possible the plastic bags which take 10...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76923076923 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57515258085 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2837377219 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21894001269 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665590872307 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612281455192 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13023424677 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104695793802 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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