There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason.
Do you agree or disagree?
People are motivated to stay in the same job for many different reasons. This essay disagrees that salary is the main factor because most companies pay the same amount of money for the same job and the culture of a company is far more important than monetary considerations.
It does not make sense to say that money is the primary reason why people stay with the same company because for any job there are a number of different companies all offering a similar salary. This can easily be demonstrated by looking in the employment section of any newspaper and looking at similar roles in the same city. For example, in London right now there are 17 corporate finance jobs and of those. 6 of them are looking for people with 5 years experience and all pay between $60,000-70,000 per year.
What is more important is the ethos that each corporation has and whether you fit in with their philosophy. Some workplaces are very relaxed and put an emphasis on work-life balance, whereas others are more focused on performance at the expense of free time. This was illustrated in a recent New York Times article that highlighted the brutal working hours and intense pressure on Amazon employees to hit their targets. Some employees left because of the stress, but others thrive in this environment and say it as a great chance to develop their skills.
In conclusion, this essay disagrees that wages are the most important consideration when remaining in the same job for a long period of time because if employees don’t like their current salary they can simply move to another company and get paid more or less the same and corporate culture is a far more relevant concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e motivated to stay in the same job for many different reasons. This essay disagrees that sala...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...en remaining in the same job for a long period of time because if employees don't like th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, more or less, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7724137931 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61172696065 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4985371141 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214738967876 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794894934923 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644592644275 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128003865801 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615918295962 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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