Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree?
Throughout the history of mankind, it is true that many people around the world had different views in term of the role of up-to-date fashion style. In my opinion, while I agree that people should choose costumes based on their comfortable feeling when they wear, but it cannot deny the fact that the impacts of modern dress on every aspect of life bring many extra points.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that people should wear clothing which are in accordance with their own interest. It stands to the reason that everyone around the world has their personal taste in fashion’s trends, as some of them like loose clothes which were more enjoyable to wear. However, there are some sections of society who prefer to wear tight costumes with regard to the idea indicating that it could make them feel more young and energetic. Moreover, the trends of fashion are undisputedly dynamic and change rapidly in just a few months, constituting the harm to their money’s budget. Therefore, it is very consumptive to catch up with the latest style of fashion even if they were able to afford, but it cannot be verified that they must not buy clothes more often.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that up-to-date fashion has many advantages for the individuals. The first reason the support it is that following the modern style make everyone feel more confident in their business. To illustrate, we can see clearly that every sales manager throughout the world might meet the potential clients, so that they must have a great confidence in convincing their customers, and one of the ways would be stylish dress which they wear in the meeting. Furthermore, humans are also appraising the worth of someone based on their physical appearance and performance. For example, should there be two potential candidates in a job interview of Google’s company, both have nice personalities, unique technical skills and a wide range of knowledge, but one of these candidates wear frumpy and old-fashioned clothing, while the other show the modest suit. For this instance, the later candidate has the higher probabilities of being selected by employer.
In conclusion, while the idea of choosing the clothes with regard to their own preference is totally true, I still believe that people should follow the latest style of fashion since it quietly affects the performance’s value of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02756892231 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75344281813 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7763262812 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.285714286 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9285714286 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181654027992 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567180720837 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382080571928 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112591897422 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101672697664 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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