Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is a school of thought that many universities throughout the world nowadays have planned the equal amount of students between different sex in every course. Nevertheless, its impact on the outcome of society brings much controversial debate with regard to the success of those scholars when they would due to the social atmosphere in the future. The essay will elaborate both positive and negative sides of this argument from a cultural perspective.
Providing the same proportion of alumnus is undisputedly one of the main arrow for getting a great deal of advantage impact on social system. The first reason to support it is that these actions would have a lot of positive speech based on policies of the fair between male and female which were a contentious debate from many decades ago. Moreover, building this kind of subject's management can bring a great percentage of advantage things such as the recovery of the attitude between girl and boy when they must employ together. To illustrate, we can see from many companies in China, a country which is infamous for the unfair of women from the century of those ancestors, are having a strong trust on man and disgusting the woman with no reason to explain this type of action on a regular basis. Therefore, universities which can deal with this type of subject's class, would gain the strong voice from global society and produce lots of successful candidate for human beings in a foreseeable future.
On the other hand, universities should also get some imagination of disadvantage sides which would lead to break the class's environment. Actually, any advantage thing was probably taking some negative phenomenon in every aspect. Female alumnus, for instance, were probably gotten the violence from the opposite gender in some condition based on the hatred of their thought at underdeveloped countries. It stands to the reason that university's system should plan the law with regard to the unfair around gender and bring a little activity for them to recover their low conception.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that although the mission to improve the number of male and female scholars in every subject is greatly important, the policy relating to those kinds of intention could also value considerably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07733333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73031247703 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1349961507 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.461538462 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8461538462 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133823367225 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047542064432 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047889818067 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923622236969 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372368590891 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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