With an increasing population communication via the internet and text messaging face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
To what extend do you agree?
It is true that with the advancement of the technology, ways of communication has been immensely changed. I completely agree that with the current phase of technological development, talking on digital devices will be preferred and one to one conversation by sitting together will be lost.
To begin with, in recent time everybody is having busy working schedule and do not have leisure time to sit and have discussion. In order to find the suitable job, youngsters are moving to different countries or cities, and living at far places, which makes face to face conversation impossible. So they choose to have online talks while travelling from work place or while doing any other activity. Therefore, due to hectic work timings and getting the work at far places, are causing change in the way of interaction among youth.
Moreover, with the growth in the technology, communication online is becoming extremely cost effective. Prices of Mobile phone and computers are decreasing continuously and they are coming into the market with many added features, which is making the communication more interactive. Apart from this many mobile application and social networking sites are gaining popularity which is making it possible to talk with group of people at one time. In this modern world, practically nobody is at distance because technology has gifted many cheap and attractive way to communicate. Hence, up gradation of modern technology has changed the way world interact.
In conclusion, change is the law of the nature, so is the case with, way people exchange their thoughts. Interaction online by using various modern gadgets is preferred by individuals and which will definitely lead to vanish of face to face communication
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95167764497 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0476715915 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173881200423 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632095104036 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058845781138 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114513786876 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391517206422 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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