The pictures below show the changes that took place at Laguna Beach from 1950 to 1990.
The development of Laguna Beach during a four-year period is presented in the picture.
Overall, several facilities were developed and built as to tourism purposes while from year-to-year the Laguna Beach witnessed a significant change.
The most noticeable changes in Laguna Beach were the tourism facilities. This replaced beach huts in the initial year into villas (1970), and it became a huge hotel because in 1990 it was predicted to be increasing visitors. Another development was the car park in the east of the hotel which replaced the Caravan Park. Near the car park, a pool was built in order to attract more tourists, so the hotel’s guests could enjoy their leisure time without paying the entrance tickets.
In the west of hotel, the landscaped gardens was replaced the sand dunes which available since 1950, so that visitors could learn about the variety of plants. Moreover, before 1990 the road in the north-east was a small path, and it surrounded with woodland while the beach location showed no changes in the south-west of Laguna. Eventually, the surf school was opened as to facilitate the tourists who interested in surfing because this school took place near the sea.
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- The pictures below show the changes that took place at Laguna Beach from 1950 to 1990 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10152284264 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62521464136 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8927810992 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207454922789 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853684255588 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662330101067 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121294477519 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333381582804 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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