The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
When the number of population increased dramatically, it caused a significant development of an island which is illustrated in the two maps.
Overall despite some local areas were demolished, the fishing village had been changed into a resort, and more people came to such village.
A golf course was built, and it replaced the large green areas. Moreover, more houses in the village and the new development of tourist shop in the west of the island. The olive garden was extended, and it changed into a farmland that cultivated vegetables and fruits therein. At glance, there is a quite long road in the east of the resort which connected mountain and coastal area, and more residential areas were redeveloped.
The original village was surrounded by homes of locals, and hotels were also built near the seashore. Although the harbour and also the boats therein was demolished, there was a beach along the resort which attracted the tourists visiting such island.
- Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- These graphs show the result of a survey. 100 people (single men and women and couples with/without children) were interviewed to find out who they typically spend time with on a free day. The percentages shown here are averages.Summarise the information 67
- The money spent of the UK, measured in pounds 78
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 73
- The pictures below show the changes that took place at Laguna Beach from 1950 to 1990 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14375 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68092218276 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7260770033 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155403942802 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652909546523 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350557612233 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893694957684 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426914671443 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.