Men and Women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Many women protesting these days on equality and feminism are taking the world by storm. No matter the inherent physical differences Women are equally suited for many tasks as men. Wheather it is about physical strength or mental capabilities. The brain of a woman is no different than that of a man, there is no difference in that, if a man can be elected for presidency so can a woman.
Women have been considered fragile creatures since the beginning of time. However, major accomplishments by women are often overlooked. For instance, Queen Elizabeth is the first woman who has been ruling over England for the longest of time.
Madam Curie is famous in the chemical world for her work on Radioactivity and endless contirbution in shaping the chemistry. By the support of these few examples out of hundreds of them women are as hard working as men and can anything that a man can do.
In another instance, Amelia Airhart was the first female Aviator who flew solo across the atlantic ocean and recieved the United States Distinguished Flying Cross for this accomplishment.
Some may shed some light on the specious belief that impregnated women cant work or are not fit for working but as of another example Gal Gadot, an Israelian actress, who was pregnant when she started filming of ther Action movie ''Wonder Woman". Not only that but she also performed her own stunts.
The main reason to address this example was to explain the variety of fields in which women can excel and are excelling.
Women also particitpate in sports, which are considered to be a ''Man's Thing''. Serena Williams is a perfect example of going against these dogmas. She is ranked as the No.1 professional tennis player.
In conclusion, despite the physical differences, women cannot be held back in order to perform many tasks. With the right amount of diligence and passion any man and a woman can achieve anything they want to without any gender barriers.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 62
- "Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education." 66
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper."The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time 50
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively 50
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...s. The brain of a woman is no different than that of a man, there is no difference i...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'sheds'.
Suggestion: sheds
...ss for this accomplishment. Some may shed some light on the specious belief that ...
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Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... specious belief that impregnated women cant work or are not fit for working but as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90634441088 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69637419923 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3064553908 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26703701213 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829047276885 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118289373938 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977500402681 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083730398896 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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