Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Freshwater supply has always been a major concern for some of the countries, Moreover, the rise in population has made it a worst and global concern. In this essay, the reasons behind the phenomenon and the possible solutions to the problems will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The chief reason behind is the handling in an improper module. Leakages and loopholes in the system are the backbones behind the destruction of the resources. For illustration, the leaks in the municipality water pipes and zero management of waste control are the repercussions of this devastating dips in the freshwater levels. In addition to that, the drastic rise in the population, especially in countries like China and India, increased the demands at a rapid rate as the population reach its saturation levels. Fulfilling the needs of everyone in such countries has become a major challenge for governments.
Various ways can play a vital role to improve these conditions including river management system and rain cycle adoption in a scientific manner. The government should utilize these rivers in an optimum way by generating projects to control the water levels and limits the wastes from those rivers. Filtration and cleaning of rivers are also another way to improve these limited resources. On the other hand, the individuals should educate each other and controls the waste being a responsible citizen and end user of the water.
In conclusion, although the lack of sufficient fresh water is one of the major problems in the world these days, there are many solutions to hurdle. The law enforcement agencies and citizens of the nation should work together to eliminate the cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18613138686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84515444762 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7859047834 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12000155906 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348412335285 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392828666936 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702669137577 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451001725525 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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