Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to globalization, foreign languages play a significant role in keeping the world a little closer. it is a heated debate, whether a particular language is for work and travel only. However, I personally believe that it holds much more importance rather than being used in necessities.to some while it is the opposite for others.
To begin with, most of the people from the very origin have learned their mother tongue and to receive proper knowledge about the other is quite difficult so most of the people gain fair information to keep the life going. Moreover, circumstances are developed in a timeframe which forces an individual to clear the basics and concentrate on the bigger picture. To illustrate, most of the uneducated sectors in India travel to foreign countries like Canada, Australia and so on, to do so they pass the English Proficiency tests like IELTS and TOEFL in a couple of months which is a proof that they do not require the high levels of that language.
On the other hand, it is commonly believed by some that obtaining the basics is not enough as there are other aspects related to it as well. Firstly, those who want to dig deep into the culture of one nation skill is a must so as to attain the ability to get more insights into it at a higher level. Secondly, for a professional who wants to conduct business is required to know it deeply. Finally, to get along with the localities, some believe that it is essential to know about the language more than just knowing.
To conclude, I strongly consider that indeed for some it can work by just knowing the basics while for the other group it might be more valuable so, in the end, I would like to say that it is the decision of a person and he/she should act accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e culture of one nation skill is a must so as to attain the ability to get more insights...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59554140127 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63305700051 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5080524601 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166310844222 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570926948279 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394039709728 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969437469133 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304980356859 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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