Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Talking about todays generation, many individuals spend most of the time working in offices or their business. Relating to the context, most people rely and feel comfortable in occupying themselves pleasuring with office colleagues. Whilst, there are generations which hesitates in making relationships after work hours. To my opinion, there is no harm in making bonding with colleagues at workplace and turning them into real friendship.
To start with, people who are good at humor and have good interpersonal skills are easily adaptable to every situation. The extrovert feature helps them in boosting their knowledge and talent as well through enormous communications. Moreover, co-workers in revert will not feel shy in asking them or cracking jokes at each other at workplace as they know they will not going to take it at heart. According to my experience, people who are talkative could be very easy-going and showcase perfect personality to spend leisure time.
Secondly, the other category of people who only talk profession and have distinctive mindset have their own thoughts. For instance, an employee at its workplace does not reveal his/her personal information because he/she doesn’t want to get portrayed as emotional fool. They keep themselves away from paparazzi and does not get quickly involved in the social talks. These people try to maintain a balance between their social life and work life. Inevitably, sometime this stringent approach does not let them enjoy their time at their workplace and this may also affect their productivity and efforts in completing their routine tasks.
To conclude this, most people truly believe in making interpersonal communication and gets benefited by spending tremendous time with office friends. Nonetheless, keeping their leisure time to be only spent with close friends or family may sometime lead to isolation for some and have its own implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...at workplace as they know they will not going to take it at heart. According to my ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, talking about, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85853692181 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4532397765 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.733333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331258364247 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105206573804 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855361773892 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195054911273 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681820293407 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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