cicyling to work should be encouraged in big cities
In urban areas, people are motivated to use bicycle for commuting to the workplace. In my opinion, cycling has tremendous benefits on health and an environment, so encouraging people to use cycle would definitely prove beneficial.
To begin with, there are compelling reasons to encourage the population to use bicycle, The foremost reason I believe is the exercise it gives to the body. Admittedly, if the person travels in a car, he sits still and his body gets no exercise, while cycling gives exercise to the body. As most of the people have sedentary jobs, they do not get enough time to go to fitness centre or exercise at home. Thus, taking cycle to office should fulfill this need. For example, my colleague started coming to office on bi-cycle to reduce his weight when it was suggested to him by his doctor.
Another reason to use cycle to work is due to the fact that bi-cycle is eco-friendly option to travel and it helps in conservation of the environment. The metro-cities are seen crowded with motors and buses and have polluted the environment significantly. In this case, bi-cycle is environment friend and does not emit any harmful smoke as fuel-based vehicles do. Therefore, the non-polluting option of cycle certainly helps in contributing towards the better environment, when the world is facing serious issue of pollution and global warming.
On the contrary, it is evident that the cycle takes more time in comparison to a car or a bike. In other words, an employee has to spend more time while travelling to destination. Unequivocally, if he uses other vehicles, he reaches faster and can use time effectively. Consequently, many workers do not prefer bicycle to commute on daily basis.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that although bicycle is slow and takes more time to reach office, its usage should be encourage due to the enormous benefits it has on the health of the body along with the protection of an environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n crowded with motors and buses and have polluted the environment significantly. ...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...me to reach office, its usage should be encourage due to the enormous benefits it has on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93051359517 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89385297584 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1048112455 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844880952515 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253512799027 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370901446159 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496294160574 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042218322854 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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