You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Bringing a life into this world is one of the most splendid experiences for a mother. But the number of abortion cases have increased significantly and is a controversial topic with people having strong opinions. This essay will discuss why abortion should be made legal with strong controls in place even though there are points contrary to it.
Certainly, there are some issues associated with undergoing an abortion. Foremost is the societal norms as per which it is considered a taboo. This is because it is considered akin to taking a life. There are researches, which are cited to support this argument, suggesting that after 24 weeks the fetus starts to develop a heart. Secondly, it harmfully affects the health of mother when she is operated upon. As the umbilical cord is attached very strongly to the woman’s womb, it can become life threatening for her. For instance after 20 weeks of pregnancy, 20% of abortions lead to death and 50% lead to permanent infertility as per medical records of our country.
However, it should not be forgotten that there must be some practical reasons because of which many abortions are taking place in recent times. Firstly, as the number of young people having sex has increased, the teenage pregnancies are on a rise despite education about protected sex in universities. In such scenarios, a girl is mentally and physically not strong enough to deliver a child. Additionally, the participation of women in corporate world has risen tremendously. In case she is not mentally ready because of her priorities towards career over taking a maternity leave or nurturing a child, the same should be respected. In my family, the average age of delivering first child was around 22 in my mother’s generation, which has increased to 28 in mine. Therefore, it is important to accept the changing realities and the legal system should be designed in a way so that it supports such scenarios. Women should be able to abort till a certain period, up to which their life is not compromised.
This essay discussed though there are adverse impacts on mother’s health and negativism in society, this is a current reality which we need to accept considering different scenarios and provide legal framework to support it. Therefore, I am of the opinion that abortion should be allowed legally with certain guardrails to ensure safety of the mother.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03768844221 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89124370634 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0617960157 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235523227356 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618793414345 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598037345043 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147133940028 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632155703163 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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