New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that young parents should take part in child-care courses in order to provide a decent education for their offspring. While I agree with these programs, I do not believe that all parents should be required to join these activities.
To embark on, to ensure their children will be well-cherished, parents are encouraged to come to these classes, which offer a great deal of precious knowledge. It is exemplified by a higher proportion of children who have good mental and physical health conditions that parents have quality time with them after making sense of their offspring when attending to these courses. Another reason is parents are required to have parenting skills such as food usage for children. In fact, numerous children are suffered from food-related diseases due to clueless about fresh food. Therefore, young couples are encouraged to attend these courses for a rich variety of benefits for their youngsters.
However, these aforementioned reasons can be seen as the opposite angle. Every child has their own needs or demerits and with the advancement of technology, parents can get access to a fair amount of information instead of splashing out on child-care courses. Moreover, people can ask someone who has much experience in raising children like grandparents since they have lived for many years and have brought up their own offspring.
In conclusion, while I agree with this assertion that parenting classes are beneficial for the development of a child, I do not believe wholeheartedly that educational opportunities for young parents in young households play an important role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93535881298 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2272525611 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284852894199 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111064245 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607693020881 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176636691381 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681822345625 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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