you bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. write a letter to interior decorator seeking information about his services.
in your letter;
let him know how you came to know about his work or name.
specify about your home.
discuss your furnishing taste
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in reference to inquire about the professional services you provide for interior decoration of apartments.
To elucidate I recently visited my friend in Jersey who availed your interior decoration services for his newly purchased flat. I was impressed by the modification done on the ceiling of the master bedroom especially the turquoise lights attached to the ceiling provided an appealing look additionally the work done in living room especially on walls provided a fresh look to the house. Hence I would like to avail your professional services for my brand new studio apartment which has a master room and a living room along with a kitchen.
Although the shades used on the walls at my friend’s house were dark I would prefer more light colours as they increase the positive aura in a house. Additionally, I would love to have the same modification on the ceiling as you have done at my friend’s place in Jersey as it provides an elegant look to the room.
I look forward to your response and discussing things in detail when we meet in person.
Yours faithfully
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...lls provided a fresh look to the house. Hence I would like to avail your professional...
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Line 6, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t provides an elegant look to the room. I look forward to your response and disc...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en we meet in person. Yours faithfully Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84077454227 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4735290408 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187496659555 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875024257001 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680641453347 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121760225368 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101940386473 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.