People are living longer these days. What do you think has made this possible?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection reflection on typical day reveals medical technology has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people has always been intrigues to analyse and explain the reason for improvement in field of medical science, which ultimately resulted in improving life expectancy of an individual. Regarding this, I would say this has resulted from improved knowledge of medical knowledge and enhanced method to deal with them.
Firstly, people are living longer lives is due to the improvement in knowledge of the medical problems. this is because the government is spending a lot of money in understanding the root cause of different deadly diseases. As a result, we are able to know the scientific reasons for the cause of a particular disease. Hence, this helps researchers to find out the anti dot to cure the disease.
Secondly, medical technology and advancement in diagnosis equipment has also contributed a lot in improving the life expectancy. due to this, patient are easily diagnosed and cured as quickly as possible. As a case in point, our ancestors were not well equipped with different advanced medical treatments. they were force to face the death even if they were infected by a simple viral infection, which is not a case today.
Hence, based on the arguments above, I would stress that improvement in life expectancy is not only due to enhancement knowledge of medical treatments but also with the advancement in proper medical science.
- traffic congestion is increasing in major cities. what do you think is the reason for this? 65
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract from one another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples? 72
- Why can some people not balance their personal and professional life? How do you think we can balance them? 77
- Experience better than book knowledge. Do you agree or disagree 55
- Traffic congestion is increasing in major cities? What do you think is reason for this. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9397701476 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7260445564 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100527507777 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425748934386 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569025307093 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612985466261 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563611328424 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.