A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Numerous owners argue that animals ought not to be treated as slaves to serve humans' lives, wheares other people think the opposite side. In my own opinion, perhaps we should appreciate every single breast's soul like the way persons behave ourselves.
On the one hand, it is impossible to deny the fact that animals contribute large part to many aspects of development process of humankind from the very first time they was born. In the past, thousand of army from various countries often utilized fighting horses to move from places to another places due to horse's strength. Moreover, people certainly need to kill animals for foods' supplies and turn them into materials to produce tools, clothes or testing new drugs on them before applying on humans' lives to drop the level of death rate.
On the other hand, although there are several benefits if you use species but a lot of scientists around the world fairly claim that we are closer to end days if we don't stop consuming animals' food unsuitable. Animals' survival help us maintain nature's balance. To be more specific, when one species become extinct, it gonna influence to other species such as foods' providing or lives habit in the negative sides. For example, bees impact to pollination of plants then some days it gonna extinct that mean we are not able to plant flowers.
In general, we utterly need to take care of animals in better manners to save not just their lives and ourselves as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85657370518 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32120183711 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673306772908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0473669171 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.9 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214059868677 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722980041858 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485571507327 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113838648999 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364746416729 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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