In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it.
It is argued that the increasing crime rate both in size and sophisticated tricks is becoming a serious concern in many areas of the world. This essay will discuss some primary reasons why this is happening and put forward several solutions for this issue.
There are numerous causes why level of crime is becoming more frightening and I believe that the widen gap between the rich and the poor is the first culprit. There is a large number of the poor either cannot meet their basic needs such as food and accommodation or have difficulty finding a good job. They tend to be at all cost to make a living, not only to pay living expenses but also desire to experience life as the rich. What the worse, many people are lured to perpetrate crimes in hope of achieving instant wealth by sophisticated tricks and brutal actions. This could pose a serious threat to the safety and stability of societies. One good illustration for this is that some criminals would like to kidnap children from rich families to get amounts of ransom. Another reason is the laws introduced are insufficiently strict to act as a deterrent in terms of preventing people committing crimes. Punishments and sanctions of these laws are probably inadequate harsh in comparison to consequences caused by offenders. Thus, there is no significant deterrent effect to people having evil intent or reckless actions.
There are various measures that could be implemented to tackle this problem. Firstly, it is necessary for governments to narrow income inequality. Economically speaking, creating employment for people without levels of education such as manual jobs is not only contribution to reducing rate of unemployment, improve citizens’ standard of living, but also developing national economy. Secondly, stricter punishments should be imposed for intentional crimes, recidivism or serious crimes which put communities at high risk of danger such as capital punishment or life imprisonment. This may helps to encourage law-abiding citizens.
In conclusion, there are various reasons leading to high level of crime and steps need to be taken to address this issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing more frightening and I believe that the widen gap between the rich and the poor is th...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...the poor is the first culprit. There is a large number of the poor either cannot meet their basic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18155619597 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92178660196 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599423631124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4218976808 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220153980382 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063156417454 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647067794434 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148565581887 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398593939475 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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